Most of the helpful comments that I got were mostly like: Make your drawing more detailed, and such. Those types of comments didn't really help me out because on the blueprint you only had to draw a stick figure to show where you would draw people, so naturally I wasn't just going to have the final drawing be a stick figure.
However I did get one really helpful comment that I am actually going to use. It said that is would be neat to have only parts of it be detailed and have the rest be kind-of blurry and not so detailed (like a lot of folk art is). I thought that was a really good suggestion and am going to incorporate it into my picture.
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You have shown dedication to this project by coming in early and spending time and energy planning and starting your art project. I am impressed by the way you take critique and use it to make your project stronger. You have incorporated suggestions and stayed true to your intial plan and style. I'm looking foward to your creation and how it evolves. The connection between fighting with words and military force is a strong connection between the people you are honoring. You have a great focus for your painting - keep in mind your major theme and your inspiration from folk art as you paint and create. Great start!
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